<p>I don't want to explain it here as I don't want it to be stolen. The prompt asks about my interest in business, should I talk about the career I am planning on having or should I talk about how my interest in business originated (my original idea).</p>
<p>It’s between telling MSB that you want to use it as a kickstart to your own success or that everything you’ve done is culminating in attending MSB. The latter sounds better IMO.</p>
<p>I went with the culmination of interest for the essay. Should I add that there is money to be made with a business degree? Or is that too shallow? Because I do feel like being able to make a lot of money makes life easier. Right now, without a conclusion, my essay it 320 words, it would make it the perfect length if I added the money part.</p>
<p>Nevermind, I am just going to add a conclusion and refine other parts, making it long enough.</p>
<p>My SFS essay was pretty long. Try adding even more.</p>
<p>Did you ever talk about Georgetown specifically in the essay or just foreign services in general? The MSB prompt just talks about business in general, not mentioning Georgetown, I would want to mention Georgetown, but that could be taken as not following directions.</p>
<p>You want to say why georgetown is the catalyst that would propel your ideals</p>