Some advice, please?

<p>I have two essays I’ve written that was used for my UC apps. Reading them again, I find them to be pretty good in showcasing my personality. Thus, I don’t know if I can (or even have the time to) write a completely new one that may not even be up to par.</p>

<p>If someone can please read both of them and tell me which one is better, that would be appreciated. </p>

<p>This essay will be used for the common app essay by the way.</p>