Wrote 2 Common App essays

<p>I wrote 1 common app essay…didn’t like it…wrote another… decided to revise the 1st… and now i have 2 common app essays.</p>

<p>I feel like my 1st essay portrays me as a better “fit” for Brown, but I’m not sure if the second essay is better. Would anyone mind reading both and giving me suggestions as to which one i should use?</p>

<p>Preferably no 2014ers unless doing ED. I want readers who will be able to get back to me tonight, by 9:45 at the latest if possible. In the past ive had readers say they’ll help but they never respond back. I’m being very cautious so i will check previous posts.</p>

<p>I can do it, already applied.</p>

<p>ill read it i EDed brown</p>

<p>pm’ed you lr2009</p>

<p>pm’ed you izy2492. thanks both of you</p>

<p>hey can you clear ur inbox
it says ur inbox is full and i cant send u a message</p>