<p>Please critique my first draft of the Cornell CAS supplement essay. Although I am aware of the grammatical mistakes present, I would like to hear more about ideas( does the essay tell a lot about me, and does it show that I really want to be in Cornell). So is anybody willing to read and critique my first draft essay</p>
<p>Check out the consolidated list of readers if you need some essay editing. Just make sure to be careful.</p>