someone read my essay?

College Essays
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<p>NO '14-ers please!</p>

<p>I'm looking for someone already in college .. or older.</p>

<p>It's my common app essay and I want to know if my essay:</p>

<ol>
<li><p>tells the story clearly. like, you understand what's happening and it isn't confusing</p></li>
<li><p>has a good balance between the actual story and the things I learned out of it</p></li>
<li><p>will it be one of those cliche-like essays that no one remembers? or does it have specific and unique features that might stick out to the adcoms?</p></li>
</ol>

<p>I'll be PM-ing it to you..</p>

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<p>Hey-- I’ll take a look at your essay if you would like. </p>

<p>I am, however, a 2014er (I’ve been accepted ED to one of CC’s “Top Universities” already though, so I’m done with essays!)</p>

<p>And I would ask you to email me the essay instead of PM-ing it.
( <a href="mailto:missmibster@yahoo.com">missmibster@yahoo.com</a> ) </p>

<p>If you still want to send it over, feel free :)</p>