<p>my activities essay is like 80 words too long, and this is after some revision. any really brutal editor want to read? you must have a solid posting record, like way more solid than mine. i'll be checking especially carefully with 2014ers. thanks.</p>
<p>i can try. you can check comments left for me by other people i’ve helped.</p>
<p>I’ll tear that **** a new *******</p>
<p>Lolllllll^</p>
<p>i’m a 2014er, not sure what u mean by solid but i think i’m okay! lol</p>
<p>sure i’d love to read it tho, where r u applying?</p>
<p>PM me. I’ll be happy to help out.</p>
<p>You can send it to me if you need want another opinion. I really hate pompous, long-winded writing.</p>
<p>if you need more opinions, pass it this way</p>
<p>brutal honesty- that’s me.</p>