The Fabricated Universe : College essay

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<p>I have a quick question on the college essay in the uncommon part where you get to chose your own topic. </p>

<p>I am part done with an Essay titled :The Fabricated Universe and How I Came To UnderStand It and Like it.</p>

<p>It deals with the way man fabricated the universe by his means of understanding it. I have alluded to the Geillio Satellite, Hubble , the string theory and mathematical constants. Then i have added on the reason why i love science the way it is and my intention in the future to help it. I have included the 'i like science factor' in a different way.</p>

<p>I have seen sample college essays from Barnes and Noble and most of them seem simple and straight forward (with few exceptions), is my way of dealing good? or should i just use one of the four other options (i kinda like the cartesian plane prompt)</p>

<p>I will be posting this on other colleges too with minor adjustments, so if this is a holistic type of essay please do comment about it.</p>

<p>Thank You</p>

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<p>We can't judge it without reading it.</p>

<p>My advice, though, from what you've written: Make sure it pertains to you. They could read an essay like that anywhere - your ideas on the universe certainly aren't unique (and don't take this to be a bad thing). If it concerns how string theory relates to you and your desires, it would be much stronger than if you wrote techical/philosophical garble.</p>

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<p>Ok , thank you. Yes, it has a link between me and string theory and mathematics. I was trying a different approach and yes i am pulling my info off various books i read such as '1,2,3,infinity' , 'fermat's Engima' and other science books.</p>

<p>Thank You</p>