The Fabricated Universe : College essay

Colleges and Universities A-Z California Institute of Technology
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<p>I have a quick question on the college essay in the common application part where you get to chose your own topic.
I am part done with an Essay titled :The Fabricated Universe and How I Came To UnderStand It and Like it.</p>

<p>It deals with the way man fabricated the universe by his means of understanding it. I have alluded to the Geillio Satellite, Hubble , the string theory and mathematical constants. Then i have added on the reason why i love science the way it is and my intention in the future to help it. I have included the 'i like science factor' in a different way.</p>

<p>I have seen sample college essays from Barnes and Noble and most of them seem simple and straight forward (with few exceptions), is my way of dealing good? or should i just talk about the time i made plastic out of milk?</p>

<p>I will be posting this on other colleges too, so if this is a holistic type of essay please do comment about it.</p>

<p>Thank You</p>

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<p>It could work. Admissions officers are trying to get a sense of who you are and how you'll add to the community they are creating. Make sure that your essay isn't just a history of science.</p>

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<p>this seems like it could be interesting, creative, and revealing, but unless there's a good reason for UnderStand, i would recommend being a little less creative with the capitalization. :-D</p>

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<p>Oh , didn't notice that It was just Understand , capital for U</p>

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<p>What is the Geillio Satellite?</p>

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<p>Galileo, I guess.</p>