<p>I wrote about my exposure to many careers in my life and how that inspired me to want to find something that I am truly passionate about. I wrote it in a whimsical/light tone; it also had a funny anecdote in it. I'm worried this will come off as me having no set purpose or motivation. I think it was very well written and my English teacher said it was stunning, but i'm not sure what colleges would think. This is only the first draft/essay that I've written, so I could easily scratch this and completely start over. What do you think?</p>
<p>It’s hard to tell by just describing the tone. If you send it to me I’ll tell you what I think.</p>