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I'd have to respectfully disagree, NJ....the admissions officer from Duke commented on my son's essay many times: on the phone, in email, and over dinner with us when we brought our son to Durham. ;)</p>
<p>Miss E~</p>
<p>As someone whose brother is also a diplomat, I adored your essay. It is genuine, beautifully written, and most importantly, from the heart. I think it will serve you very well in your admissions process, and I wish you all the luck in the world!! ~berurah</p>