Too much of a cliche?

College Essays
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<p>Hey!
I need someone to read my supplement essay i'm not sure if it's to broad and doesn't show much about me or if its just to close to a cliche... any help would be much appreciated!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it and try to help… (:</p>

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<p>Thank you i’ll send it to you right away!</p>

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<p>I’ll be willing to read if ya need it!</p>

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<p>Sure i’ll read it pm me</p>

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<p>Okay, thank you! I’m going to edit it and send it to you guys later :)</p>

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<p>Feel free to PM me. I’ll be happy to make suggestions.</p>

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<p>feel free to pm me!</p>

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<p>PM me!~~~~</p>

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<p>Pm me and I’ll be glad to help!</p>

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<p>Thanks for all the help guys i’ll send it right away!</p>

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<p>~~~~ bump!, anyone else mind reading it? ~~~~</p>