<p>Hey guys,</p>
<p>This is my first post. I thought I'd get some 2nd opinions about my hopes of transfering into Wharton as a Sophmore.</p>
<p>I attend a community college in Arizona.
College GPA: 4.0
High School GPA: 3.7
SAT M: 690
SAT W: 570
SAT R: 570</p>
<p>Essays: Very good and written specifically for Wharton</p>
<p>Pg 217 essay: Wrote about a cake business I started and what I learned for the experience.</p>
<p>Additional essay: Wrote about my dads battle with cancer/liver transplant and what it taught me. Very good.</p>
<p>Extracurriculars: Playing music for 8 years now (bass guitar, guitar). Performed in high school Jazz Bands, Orchestra, Jazz combos, marching bands, and toured Europe with an orchestra. Also participated in many local bands for the last 6 years. I've produced/recorded music for a lot of local bands and hope to own a major record label one day.</p>
<p>My passion for music came across in my applications and I also sent them a cd (a really nice one) of one of the bands I'm in.</p>
<p>Addition Info: Neither of my parents went to college; I'm a white male (18 yrs old).</p>
<p>Let me have it (be gentle) :/ Haha</p>
<p>THANKS!</p>