Transfer Common app essay: wanna read/edit?

<p>I am having trouble with my common app essay for transfer which is just:
Please provide a statement (250 words minimum) that addresses your reasons for transferring and the objectives you hope to achieve.</p>

<p>Can anyone read it and edit/ let me know comments?</p>

<p>I would be willing read and give comments/edit. The best for me is if you can email it to me in MS Word. PM me and I'll give you my email address.</p>

<p>i having problem in my common application essay,can anybody help me out for my essay...</p>

<p>I’ll give you feedback, PM it to me</p>

<p>id be willing to check it out
give me ur email address</p>

<p>I will read it if you like…PM me</p>

<p>PM, I will be harsh and honest so just expect a lot of feedback.</p>

<p>pme me…i can help</p>