<p>Well, I intended to have my mentor and recommender read my essay, but she has been less than helpful and not very prompt, missing appointments. :T</p>
<p>So, I'm interested in seeing if anybody that is particularly good at English wants to review my transfer essay to Washington University in St. Louis. I've gotten some comments from some very helpful, intelligent people, and some comments that were, to say the least, not helpful and would actually make the essay worse if I'd substituted them.</p>
<p>Please PM me if you're interested in reading. Thanks.</p>