Two Essays - Need brutal critiques and helpful ideas for improvement

<p>Hey,
I have these two essays which I think are good, but need to be great. Can you guys help me?</p>

<p>Post on this thread and PM me, and I will pm you the essays. </p>

<p>Essay #1: Football and skills learned
Essay #2: motivation for schooling</p>

<p>Both are good, and well written. Please let me know.</p>

<p>Please, only experienced, well established posters.</p>

<p>I am willing to edit your essays, though I may not be widely regarded as a “well established poster.”</p>

<p>I’ll read them. I think 700+ posts counts for something?</p>

<p>Try consulting the sticky at the top of this page. </p>

<p>I’ll read 'em, if you want.</p>

<p>Az1698, I can read yours if you read mine as I am working on mine too. I am good at grammar issues and can help you out in some sort most likely. PM me if the tradeoff works for you :D.</p>

<p>Former football player here. i’ll give you a read.</p>

<p>i’d be happy to help with your essays</p>