UC #1 Personal Statement

College Essays
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<p>I got back my personal statement from my English teacher and he said it was one of the few "on track." Yet, it needs some grammer revision and more insight. Will anyone be willing to peer edit it and give it a glance? It would be much appreciated.</p>

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<p>i'll take a look for you</p>

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<p>ill take a look. pm me</p>

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<p>i'll take a look, pm it over.</p>

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<p>ill take a look. pm me</p>

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<p>i'll take a look</p>

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<p>if you still need reading, just pm me</p>

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<p>I'll read it too if u want</p>

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<p>Ill give it a go</p>

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<p>Pm Me 2. Im Willing 2 Read It.</p>

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<p>PM me and I will take a look at it.</p>

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<p>I'll read it, but I'm applying to Berkeley this year, so you don't have to send me it if you don't want to.</p>