Uc essay #1

<p>I need help!!!
I have re-written my essay 4 times and I am still unsatisfied with it!
Can anyone help me?</p>

<p>I was thinking about writing it about how i go to an all girls catholic high school and how its a different experience.–good idea??</p>

<p>just my 2 cents. </p>

<p>my high school is pretty competitive. i heard from some people that there are students writing about this competitiveness. </p>

<p>with all these students writing about the same thing, it will definitely be hard for any of them to stand out in the admissions process.</p>

<p>unless you are pretty sure that there are no other students writing about your topic and that you are able to express and give the reader a feel of what makes who you are, i advise against the topic.</p>

<p>you might be reading the prompt a little too literally. "describing the world you come from" can be something as specific as focusing on a family member or even your own room or something as broad as a big time club that you partcipate in.</p>