<p>The prompt is:</p>
<p>Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.</p>
<p>I wrote about my school and how the majority of the schools pop is Hispanic and how theyre having a hard time in education. Since i am Hispanic, i thought that it would be a nice topic since theres a lot of talk about Hispanics having a hard time in school down here. Anyone care to read and critique my essay? It can use some brutal critiquing. Please, no 2010ers.</p>