UC essay #2

<p>Anyone want to read my UC essay prompt #2? I have two versions on the same topic, but I'm not sure which one's structured better. (no 09'ers preferred)</p>

<p>haha I'm stuck in the same position you are in except for prompt #1. I am an 09'er, but I have already finished my essays, so pm me if you would like</p>

<p>I'd love to read it.
People tell me I provide good and honest commentary.
Email me at: <a href="mailto:confusedcalcstudent@yahoo.com">confusedcalcstudent@yahoo.com</a></p>

<p>I'd be happy to read it... if you’re worried about people stealing your essay feel free to email me at my school account
<a href="mailto:sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu">sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu</a></p>