<p>Can anybody spend the time to briefly read my essay and critique it?</p>
<p>I just need pointers on any details at this point, like diction, humor, point, and uniqueness. And I'm always happy to take suggestions.</p>
<p>Thanks a bunch, I'll PM you the essay, please just PM back with "UC Prompt 1 Critique" in the title.</p>
<p>ALSO: Please, I'd prefer no '09ers, but if you'd like to critique, please at least mention you are an 09'er.</p>
<p>PM it to me.
or email me at: <a href="mailto:srrinath@gmail.com">srrinath@gmail.com</a><a href="hint:%20i'm%20at%20my%20email%20more%20often">/email</a></p>
<p>not an 09-er.</p>
<p>Ill check it out, PM me</p>
<p>I am an 09 but I would like to critique. Oh and I am willing to talk about UC essays, outside of this website, if you have an AIM or something.</p>
<p>pm me. i am a transfer student to uc</p>
<p>I am an 09er but I would be happy to take a look and offer some feedback. PM me if you'd like :)</p>
<p>I'm 09'er
In IB</p>
<p>pm me, im 09'er</p>
<p>PM it over, but I'm an '09er...</p>
<p>'09er but willing to critique...</p>
<p>'09er but already finished mine</p>
<p>I'm an 09'er and I finished both of the essays already for UC's and I am pretty good
at critiquing essays and providing some solid feedbacks. PM it to me! ;]</p>
<p>I'd love to read it.
People tell me I provide good and honest commentary.
Email me at: <a href="mailto:confusedcalcstudent@yahoo.com">confusedcalcstudent@yahoo.com</a></p>
<p>I'm an 09-er, but I'm done with my essays. Once I receive feedback from my counselor, I'm turning mine in. If you need it though, I would be more than happy to read your essays.</p>
<p>I'd be happy to read it... if you’re worried about people stealing your essay feel free to email me at my school account.... but I'd prefer a pm</p>
<p><a href="mailto:sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu">sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu</a></p>