UC Essay Prompt 1 HELP

College Essays
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Hi, can you guys read my essay and tell me what you think of it? I don’t especially like it but I want others’ opinions too.

PM me if you want to read it! It’s only 330 words because my second UC essay is 661 words…

The prompt is: Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.

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bump

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Yooo I can read it for ya in exchange for reading mine? :smiley: Side note I’m applying too so if you aren’t comfortable, feel free to give a miss.

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Did you write a mini essay with “showing” or did you just tell the adcom’s everything directly?

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I don’t know exactly, do you just want to read it? Like I said before, it’s not very long.

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I’ll read it