UC Prompt #1 Review

College Essays
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<p>Hello, I'm looking for some help/review in my UC prompt number 1:</p>

<p>Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.</p>

<p>Thanks in advance!!</p>

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<p>I can read and critique it. PM it over.</p>

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<p>^ what happened to my post? O_o</p>

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<p>Hijacking someone else's thread is not cool reeber. This is what you should do: make a thread concerning your particular question.</p>

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<p>HI starmia, I sent both my prompts to your visitor message.</p>

<p>thanks a bunches</p>

<p>ASAP</p>