UC Essays "Almost-final" Drafts

<p>Hey guys,</p>

<p>I think I need just a little bit more editing before I turn them in, so if anyone would like to critique them just give me your e-mail. The catch: PLEASE edit them in about 30 minutes or so after you receive them. </p>

<p>Anyone is welcome to do so provided that they are not suspectible of cheating. </p>

<p>Thanks.</p>

<p>I already sent in UC apps; I"ll take a look for you</p>

<p>3Point7Student can you read mine?</p>

<p>BUMP again. Need some feedback fast.</p>

<p>i sent in mine. forti ill take comment on it</p>

<p>I'd take a look at yours. I've finalized my essays and waiting for feedback from others.</p>