UC Prompt 1: am i on hte right track?

<p>Prompt 1:Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.</p>

<p>I loved getting sick. The constant coughing, the sniffing, even the vomit attracted me. I mean I never used to take a whiff of a sneeze or a cough or wipe my mouth with a Kleenex covered in mucus just to catch a cold, but the bodily reactions are what interested me. This wasn’t video game time, but the time to think. What caused mucus flowing from my nostrils? How could it be treated? That last question always hit me hard. There was a plethora of treatments in the world. My personal favorite was the taste of honey, lemon, and cinnamon whisked together and then licked during coughing season. But those were the simple treatments that took days to cure; I was interested in the quick remedy: drugs. I remember when I was sick; my father took me to the drug store to get an over-the-counter medication for the flu. He would pick one up, compare it to another, and then pick another one up and compare. I always wondered why do that, I mean why waste time when Eeny-Meenie-Miney-Moe was always there to help. What was in one medication that the other didn’t have.</p>

<p><em>there is more ot come, this is just the beginning</em></p>

<p>thanks</p>

<p>check your grammar (subject verb agreement, question mark on last sentence, couple other things). And this is an interestingly strange topic, but does it relate to your “family, community, or school” background? Might think about that…</p>

<p>Your topic is very unique. I’m interested in how you’re going to mold this topic into the in prompt. I’ll be interested in reading the rest. Just PM me. And to answer your question, The rest of the essay will determine whether or not you are on the right track. Make sure you connect the pieces together.</p>

<p>thanks man for the comment… i think it should work out… my dreams and aspirations are of becoming a pharmacist (hence the i love being sick) and i am going to be talking about how my dad is a pharmacist, and how he gave me some of his books and all… stuff like that i guess… ive started to change a couple of things… but this one will be my shorter word count about 250-350… my other one is on public speaking and that will be much longer…</p>

<p>but on the bright side this prompt 1 will be my most powerful.</p>