Good idea for UC Prompt 1 Pleaseee Help!

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<p>Hey so for the uc prompt 1 it states Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations. </p>

<p>So what I did was write about how I was always spending time in the hospital because of my disease Sickle Cell anemia. I also connected to how it ignited my Interest in the health careers. However my only problem is that I don't know how exactly to describe my time in the hospital. I was always there on the weekends and I spent Christmas there but how do I show them not tell them. Please help!</p>

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<p>Anything. Tell them what you felt, thought and observed during your time in the hospital. Why does having that disease make you want to major in that field? Also, be specific when you mention health careers. Tell them every tiniest detail and do not just briefly mention things that you have nothing to say.</p>

<p>Good luck! :)</p>