Uchicago essay Prompt 1 finished. Readers?

<p>I did the first prompt: "For the moment, you must live the question"
Feedback from readers would be appreciated. There will be intensive background checks. Thanks</p>

<p>pm me. I'd be happy to take a look.</p>

<p>I'd like to read it. I'm doing a completely different prompt but I'm having trouble getting started because I'm worried about formality and stuff. It would be nice to learn from an example.</p>

<p>pm me, im almost done with the particle accelerator one.. NOT SO GREAT lolol.</p>

<p>id love to read yours though, the first prompt was confusing.</p>

<p>PM me..im working on the 'powers of ten' prompt. are u applying EA?</p>

<p>i've already finished my essay for prompt number 1. i'll show you mine if you show me yours (lol, that came out wrong....)</p>

<p>PM ME...I'll be glad to read it and offer input</p>

<p>I'll be glad to offer input! pm me! would you be willing to read mine too?</p>

<p>i'd love to read it
im working on the powers of 10 one and i need to get my mind off it</p>

<p>who wants to trade essays? i just finished the streets essay</p>

<p>i'll read it and provide feedback</p>

<p>so im done with the streets and particle accelerator essay.. anyone wanna trade?</p>

<p>^^^ I discourage online essay trades.</p>

<p>Not trying to be the police here, so do as you want to, but I just thought I'd issue a warning. It's in your best interest not to share your essays over the internet with anonymous posters who might be parents of college students, college students who haven't written essays yet, or people who essay bank for a paid website. The internet is filled with lots of creepy stuff!!!!</p>

<p>I agree with unalove and I think if you go to last year's forums on Chicago's website Libby Pearson issued a specific post about online essay trading. But like unalove said, we're not here to police, just offering advice.</p>

<p>understood and i definitely wont do it then</p>

<p>ill read. im applying this year too, and writing that one. maybe we can compare!</p>

<p>PM me. I'll be quite happy to read it</p>

<p>pm me too! i'm done with mine already.</p>

<p>I am a student at U of C.. class of 2012
i will take a look at it and let you know. i always love U of C essay prompts :)... it definitely makes you think, doesnt it?</p>

<p>know it's past the EA deadline, but I can still give you my feedback..
A few of my friends applied to UC and got in. I have read their essays, so I can compare them to yours.</p>