<p>How did you get to see the essay online? </p>
<p>I'm not at all concerned that the kid's essay score changed from one test day to the next - 9 or 11, that isn't a big difference. Given the luck of the draw of the test question and his tendency to pick rather unusual supporting examples, I always feel like that can go either way. I am puzzled though that the multiple choice could change that much from one test to another.</p>