<p>I have a pretty unique Why Penn Essay, and I was wondering if a current Penn student or someone else really familiar with the school and campus, can give me some feedback.</p>
<p>Thanks in advance!</p>
<p>Hey, zhugeliang888! I am newly accepted to Wharton and would love to read your essay! PM me if you’d like.</p>
<p>I’ll give it a read.</p>
<p>I know. However, Jersey is an intelligent, established member of the forums, and it wouldn’t be to his advantage to create an essay similar to that of someone else applying to Penn. Besides, the essay has a lot of personal components and along with its format, I doubt anyone else can do anything with it.</p>
<p>Didn’t even know that he had a 2400, and I have no clue who Jozhekryx is, but it’s a pretty safe assumption that anyone with more than 2500 posts on CC has above average intelligence.</p>
<p>I really don’t think he will.</p>
<p>I can give it a read if you want. I’m not applying to Penn but I’m a 2015er</p>
<p>I’ll read it too if you need another. I’m not applying to Penn, but I recently wrote a “Why Duke” essay, so I guess I have a little experience with this stuff. I’m also a 2015er</p>
<p>Thanks, guys for volunteering, and I really appreciate it, but what I really need right now is the critique of people who know a lot about Penn and specifically its campus, because that’s the part of the essay that I’m most concerned about right now.</p>
<p>Well I live in Philadelphia, and go to Penn’s campus all of the time.
My sister is a sophomore as CAS at Penn. I can help you if you’d like.</p>