Unpolished Draft for Common App, Readers?

College Essays
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<p>Finished a draft for my common app, which is a little more than 500 words, which I plan to cut. But I need advice for what to cut and constructive criticisms. I will PM.</p>

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<p>Just PM it over to me.</p>

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<p>Sure pm me</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. PM me.</p>

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<p>PM it over. =)</p>

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<p>Pm me</p>

<p>Sent from my Droid using CC App</p>

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<p>I’ll read it PM me~ :)</p>

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<p>Pm it on over!</p>

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<p>just pm it</p>

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<p>PM me! I have a strange urge to review a college app essay at the moment anyway. I hope I can help.:)</p>

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<p>do you want more readers? I’ll be happy to help!</p>

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<p>Pmmmmmmmmm</p>

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<p>PM me and i’ll read it!</p>

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<p>Send it over.</p>

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<p>I can help, Just PM it over, and I can help you chop off parts of your essay.</p>

<p>Any reason why you want it to be exactly or under 500 words?</p>

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<p>Pm it over and I’ll help :)!</p>