UPenn/Wharton undergrad essay for admission

Would anyone be open to reading my UPenn specific essay??

I could read it. Pm me.

I’ll take a look

PLEASE send your essay only to an adult with a proven posting history.

While I’m not volunteering, I’ll use myself as an example. Click on my name, and then on “Threads”

You’ll see references to the classes I teach, and to my 3 teenage kids. The early ones date back to 2016, when my oldest was a Senior.

So obviously, I’m not a kid, here to steal your ideas or your words.

I’ll offer a brief critique if you PM it to me.

I can definitely give you some comments on your essay. PM me.

^^ With all due respect, last week you posted that you had a C in English http://talk.qa.collegeconfidential.com/university-pennsylvania/2074641-rescinding-offers.html#latest