Hey I applied early action to SUNY Binghamton and I need to get all my materials in by December 1st. On Monday I send everything out. Can you guys give me some crticism on my essay. It would be greatly appreciated.
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<pre><code> It was another tiresome day in the life of a high school student. I went to my job at Wendys ready to work my four hour shift, after a six hour day of school. The time dragged on and it was finally nearing the end of my shift but then I heard a little boy crying. Looking preoccupied, I grabbed a towel from the bucket of sanitizer and began cleaning the tables around the frantic child. I heard the child say, But mommy I want the Mario go-kart toy. The mom then responded with, The girl at the counter said that they only had the Mario cards. I then shook my head in disappointment at my fellow employee because I had remembered seeing a box marked Mario Racer in the back storage area of the store. I then dropped my moist towel and walked speedily behind the counter to the box with the Mario Racers. I tore it open and grabbed the Mario toy and headed back to the frenzied boy. I held the toy behind my back and told the boy, Close your eyes and put out your hand. I gave him the toy that he was yearning for. The boy was dazzled at the sight of the toy. His eyes had this glow to them that gave me a feeling of importance. He hugged my leg with his petite arms and said, with a huge smile on his face, Thank you mister.
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Making the little boy happy by bringing him that toy is what I live for. Seeing him smile and immediately change his temperament from sad to happy gave me a feeling of joy. I knew that I made a difference in a boys life. Sure it was just giving him a measly toy, but at least it made him happy. It is the minor things in life that can really make a difference. I had a long day at school and then I had to go to my job for another four hours. I was exhausted and I didnt have to make the extra effort to get the toy for the boy but I did. I put my long, grueling day aside for a brief moment just to make someone else happy. By doing that I felt that I became a better person and that is the best feeling in the world.
Fulfilling a little boys desire is just the beginning. I want to take this to a higher level. I want to continue that way of life, a life without personal gain or reward. The honor in knowing I made a difference is the only reward I need. I want to know that I made someones life better, even if it is for a brief moment. I am not saying I will be the next Mother Theresa or Princess Diana; I just want to be known as a man that put aside his desires to better the lives of the people around him. This is my main goal in life. To live everyday as the best person I can be. Life is too short to concentrate on financial needs and material possessions. I want to be the man that gets that special Mario Racer toy for a crying boy and the man that made a difference in the lives of many.