<p>I feel my essay is the ultimate chliche. I am writing about how I found out my heart is too big. But it I am playing on the fact that I am "large-hearted" and that I do community service. I feel they do not want another essay like that, but I feel it is me.
Does anyone have any pointers on how to approach this or want to read a draft by October 31?</p>
<p>I’d be happy to read it and give you feedback. If you PM me your essay and your email address, I can send it back with comments by tomorrow. :)</p>
<p>I’m open to read it, please PM me.</p>