Urgently need somebody to critique my Common App Essay

College Essays
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<p>I really need somebody to read and critique my Personal Statement. it is currently off limit and I need to cut down 50 words, which is a dilemma to me.
So any help is appreciated.</p>

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<p>I am a parent, willing to read and give feedback. Cutting unnecessary words is my forte!</p>

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<p>bump!</p>

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<p>Be happy to read and give feedback.</p>

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<p>bump again</p>

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<p>i can read it. ill send umine too if u want.</p>

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<p>bump</p>

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<p>I can read it </p>

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<p>bump</p>