Want to critique an essay?

<p>I have a finalized <em>rough draft</em> for the Common App. I would like people who have already been through the college app. process to read it and are generally good essay writers/editors. I appreciate it! I'm trying to write the best essay I have ever written - please help me make this happen!</p>

<p>If you need help with grammar, it’s best you ask a teacher.</p>

<p>And why would you say that? Is it because the second sentence in my original post is pretty awkward? haha I was in a rush. I really want some insight from others.</p>

<p>Sure, I’ll read it and give you feedback!</p>