Want to read my Yale essay?

<p>It's actually my commonapp but I'm currently doing my EA app. Parents, college students, and non-Asians preferred.</p>

<p>I know, I know, I sound racist but my essay deals with personal Asian-American issues and I'm assuming a person not of Asian descent wouldn't be interested in stealing it. I'm paranoid :(</p>

<p>Comments/critique preferred. However if you're just going to read it and not really offer anything, at least say "it's bad" or "it's good" or something along the lines so I feel good that you actually read it, lol. Thanks!!</p>

<p>Oh, and e-mail is the preferred means of communication. My formatting is kind of weird and would most certainly get messed up on a PM. So either PM me your e-mail or leave it here! Thanks!</p>

<p>I’ll read – not applying to Yale :)</p>

<p>Non Asian, would love to read.</p>