<p>Before you read this, please note that I want you to take everything into consideration, not just those top two scores you see.</p>
<p>Black Male
New Jersey
Rising Senior</p>
<p>GPA:3.34
ACT:24
Rank in class:3
Top 8 percent
National Honor Society
Going to Apply Early
Honors Classes
(My SAT scores were bad, but those are history, and I also wasn't prepared to take the test, so no one will hear about the test scores again)</p>
<p>Activities/Jobs/EC's:
Varsity Baseball 9, 10, 11, 12 - Captain
Basketball Team- 9 - Captain
Reebok-Sales Associate 11, 12
Cashier- Eport' LL - 9, 10, 11, 12
Assistant Coach-Eport' LL -10, 11, 12
Umpire-Eport' LL - 10, 11, 12
Cultural Club- 9, 10, 11, 12
Senior Spirit- Community Service- 10,11
Shadowed an Accountant- Newark YMCA- 9, 10, 11, 12
Liberty Baptist Church Soup Kitchen- Community Service- 9, 10, 11, 12
Math Club- 11, 12
Gentlemen's Awareness Club- 11,12
Delta Teen Club Member- 10, 11, 12
Knights of Columbus Scholarship Award Winner
Spelling Bee Winner-9
National Society for High School Students- 10, 11, 12
& 40+ sports related trophies, awards, plaques</p>
<p>If it helps any I am from a depressed urban city, one of the worst in America. I will be the first of the second generation kids in my family attending college. I currently have a cousin at the university of pittsburgh who has made a huge impact at the school. I will be applying early to all of the schools after my first marking period grades, which usually come out around the first week in november, which will also be an amazing boost in my gpa if I can achieve a 95 average.</p>
<p>I will mention my city, my circumstances, my cousin, and much more in my essay to try and win the admissions team over with emotional appeal.</p>
<p>Hopefully my race will play a role too even though that shouldn't be that important to me.</p>
<p>And btw, i was at University of Pitt Saturday and they mentioned that the average gpa for the incoming class was only a 3.5/3.6---hard to believe but who am I to argue?</p>
<p>Thank you</p>