Hi all- I’ll start with the basics about myself:
SAT-1570 (800 math, 770 english, one sitting only if that makes a difference), 8/7/8 on essay
SAT II- math II- 800, bio- 800, spanish- 800
APs: Bio-5, Stats-5, Span-5, Eng lang-5, WHAP-5, APUSH-5 (this year taking calc bc, physics c: mechanics, eng lit, chem, ap gov)
GPA- 4.5ish in my school’s weighting system (4.0 unweighted)
rank- don’t know for sure but I’m fairly confident it will be 2 or 3 out of 250 (I’ve taken more electives that don’t provide a boost than some)
ECs/awards:
My main ec (it takes up a lot of time) is cross country/track. I was the captain of my indoor track team as a Jr and will be a captain all three seasons this year. I am a sub-4:30 miler (hopefully sub-4:20 this year) and will be in contention for all state in cross country. 11 varsity letters. (Hope to run in college- more on this later).
I attended the VA gov school for spanish. We take an aptitude test to get in (as well as some questions about us, etc.) and there was a 9% acceptance rate. It is 3 weeks of full immersion.
Academic team: fairly prominent member of A-team that has been very competitive in our region and other tournaments and likely will qualify for states this year (maybe too late for apps?). We missed by a few points last year, but did qualify for something called PACE nationals by winning a tournament with 32 teams (counting b and c teams from other schools, maybe 12 schools total).
-member of spanish national honor society chapter at my school (will try to become an officer)
-ap bio award from my school (given by teacher to single best student)
-bio honors award from my school (given by teacher to best male and female student per section)- I know this is worthless
-spanish award (given to best 2 students per level)
Volunteer with the VA DCR natural heritage program (~50 hours so far): counting tiger beetle populations, surveying duck blinds managed by the state to prevent over-hunting, etc. (I also hope to learn to help out one of the people who is in charge of repairing some of their machinery).
I speak Italian because I lived there for a year and my step dad is from Italy, so we speak it at home.
After that it’s pretty random stuff: I used to play jazz clarinet and sax, but quit any sort of performances bc I didn’t like the pressure and rigidity that we had to use to prepare pieces.
recs: my spanish teacher for 4 years who helped me get into gov school, my academic team coach for 3.5 years and calculus/physics teacher (who went to one of the ivies I’m applying to), my cross country coach (for an extra supplement).
essays: I’m not totally set on my approach to the personal/common app essay yet. I’m thinking about approaching it from either a running angle ( we have a great xc coach, but a different track coach who doesn’t know much about training and really puts up obstacles- a lot of my winter training is after practice, in the dark, with a headlamp) or struggling w/ language in Italian public schools and illustrating how that experience will make me a more successful student.
for my school specific essays- when it gives me a chance to talk about what i’m interested in and how i’m going to explore that at the school or something similar: I really want to study bioengineering (maybe immunoenigeering) as well as spanish and indigenous languages in south and central america, bc i want to practice frugal science and create cheaper, less infrastructure-dependent biotechnologies and also be the one to apply them in the field and educate/talk to the people I want to help (obviously anyone can use a translator, but I want to be the most direct possible link between very poor people with limited roads, water, or electricity and the labs at a world class university).
School list:
Princeton- EA
UVA- EA (princeton allows you to apply early action to one public)
Brown
Penn Engineering (bioengineering)
Duke Pratt School (biomedical engineering)
Swarthmore- can definitely run here
Harvard (my grandfather went here, but I don’t think it would really be a benefit as we are not really of the means of a typical legacy family)
UC Berkeley
I know I can run at Swarthmore and would be one of the best runners there. W/ the exception of the UVA and Cal I think I stand a decent chance of being able to walk on should I be admitted, but won’t receive an admissions boost.
*might not be able to walk on to these two
If you took the time to read this thank you. I feel a little lost at sea, so any advice is helpful.
Also: I think my biggest weaknesses are:
I’ve always felt generally interested in a lot of things, so I was late to the game with bioengineering (and perhaps my approach is uninteresting/unoriginal). Therefore, I haven’t found a way to demonstrate an ability to succeed at bioengineering yet (besides AP bio 5/award and, sat II bio 800).
For penn and duke- I will be talking calculus bc and physics this year, which means they won’t see a year end grade or ap score. Hopefully bc I’m applying RD there, my mid-year report will help that by showing my grades @ that point.