Which Common App essay?

<p>I wrote two essays and I can't decide which one tells more about me. So if anyone (preferably not a new member or a fellow applicant) could give both versions a read through and vote for the best one, that'd help me tremendously. I'm INCREDIBLY indecisive -_-</p>

<p>*I'm applying to top schools.</p>

<p><em>bump</em> pleaseee?</p>

<p>I’ve gotten tons of great help already, I was just looking for a fresh set of eyes. </p>

<p>I wouldn’t mind looking at your essays and and letting you know which one best represents you. However, I am also a fellow applicant, but plagiarism isn’t my thing.</p>