<p>two different common app essays. would greatly appreciate if someone would read them and provide feedback on which one they feel is better along with criticism of it.</p>
<p>i will read your essay email it to me at <a href="mailto:firebird882g@yahoo.com">firebird882g@yahoo.com</a></p>
<p>pm it to me, ill read them</p>
<p>pm me and ill read them</p>
<p>pm, and ill critique it for you</p>