Which is the better of the two essays?

College Essays
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<p>willing to help also</p>

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<p>I will take a gander at them. PM me!</p>

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<p>Sure I'll read them and give you my honest opinion!</p>

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<p>bumperooooo</p>

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<p>PM me and I will give my advice</p>

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<p>buuuuuuuuuump</p>

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<p>Just PM me if you want some advice</p>

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<p>I won't read it.</p>

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<p>i'll read them</p>

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<p>Send em in.</p>

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<p>bump (1o char)</p>

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<p>i'll read them.</p>