2 Essays - Which is better?

College Essays
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<p>I'm looking at Yale, and I have 2 essays on similar topics, I'd just like to know which one is better. Once you let me know, I'll PM u back a running tally of what people have thought so far in case ur interested.</p>

<p>I'd appreciate any feedback</p>

<p>Thanks!!!!!</p>

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<p>I'll take a look!</p>

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<p>awesome thanks!</p>

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<p>i'll read it</p>

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<p>i'll read it</p>

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<p>Hi again SandyRun, is it the edited one and the old one? I'll take a look as well.</p>

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<p>i'll take a look</p>

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<p>I'll critique it for ya, pm it over.</p>

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<p>i'll read them, pm me</p>

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<p>buuuuuuuuuuuuump</p>

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<p>if you need a reader..pm?</p>

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<p>I'll read it. PM</p>

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<p>here .</p>

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<p>bazumppppppp</p>

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<p>I'll take a look.</p>

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<p>I will take a look at it</p>

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<p>I'll read it!</p>

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<p>I'll read it Sandy, :)</p>

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<p>I can read it if you'd like more opinions.</p>