<p>Hi! I am planning to major in engineering, and I had three of my high school teachers write me a letter of recommendation for the Common App. I know I am using my math teachers, but I don't know whether to use my Physics or English teachers one. Which one do you think is a better letter? HELP!</p>
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<p>MY PHYSICS TEACHER ONE:
To Whom It May Concern: </p>
<p>I have had the pleasure of knowing <em>John Smith</em> last year as his Pre-AP Physics teacher, which has allowed me to observe what a remarkably mature, intelligent, and likable person he is.
First of all, <em>John</em> excelled in my physics class. He posted the highest overall average in both semesters. He accomplished this by pairing his natural aptitude with diligent, persistent effort. This alone sets him above his peers. He has a great GPA and rank of 5 out of 589, which is impressive given the higher-level (AP) courses he takes. I had other students equally gifted intellectually, but <em>John</em> took the crucial extra step of putting hard work to his talent to achieve great results.
<em>John</em> is dependable, genuine, and has an impressive work ethic. He consistently turns in excellent work in a timely manner and is one of my most reliable students. He is very mature and insightful, as well. His work ethic shows through the variety of activities he involves himself in. <em>John</em> is an active leader in several admirable organizations including National Honor Society, site based committee, SOAR mentoring program, newspaper and Yearbook. In addition to his excellent grades, he is also senior class Treasurer and National Honors society Secretary. What a remarkable young man!
As impressive as his enthusiasm is, I would have to say it is second only to his wonderful demeanor. <em>John</em> is always cheery and never complains. He is a positive influence on his peers, which has improved the atmosphere in my classroom tremendously!<br>
I am confident that, not only will <em>John</em> succeed in any program he chooses, but also that he will make you feel proud that you have invested in this remarkable student. </p>
<p>Sincerely,
My Physics Teacher</p>
<p>OR...</p>
<p>ENGLISH TEACHER LETTER:
When <em>John Smith</em> asked if I would write a recommendation letter for him, I was very happy to comply. He was among the finest students in my AP Language and Composition classes during the 2011-2012 school year.
<em>John's</em> peer group electing him to more than one class office is evidence of his outgoing personailty. His friendliness, however, is not reserved for teenagers. From the first day he entered my classroom, I was impressed with how personable he was. He always emtered the classroom with a smile and left with one as well.
Having pleasant students is always a plus; having pleasant students who participate in class and write well is even better. <em>John</em> falls into the latter category. As we discussed the literature, speaking confidently and knowledgeably, he frequently contributed to the conversation. His insight was above average. After researching a controversial current issue, the students gave speeches about their topics. Speaking about capital punishment, <em>John</em> did an outstanding job of proving why his stance was better than the opposition's.
Another quality <em>John</em> has that will serve him well in college is that of being an excellent writer. He does not write everything the first time without needing to make some corrections. Who does?! Even Stephen King admits he has to rework what he has writer. Unlike some, <em>John</em>, however, is capable of seeing his first draft mistakes and correcting them. Positive evidence of his ability to write arrived in July in the form of a four on the AP Language and Composition test. I am rather surprised he did not make a five.
I guess the bottom line is that <em>John Smith</em> would be an asset to any college or university who accepts his application for admission. Please seriously consider accepting him. </p>
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<p>Are these even good letters at all? Thanks!</p>