Which version of my story do you like? :) Also willing to help anyone/read essays.

<p>Hello,</p>

<p>Would anyone be interested in reading my story, but told in two different perspectives? I'm answering the failure prompt for the Common App. I'm already leaning towards one to submit, but I would like to hear more opinions. Also, I'm only willing to send it to someone who has already submitted their apps or has already been accepted into college. Please understand!</p>

<p>Post here or PM me if you're interested!</p>

<p>Also, since I am done with my applications now, I am willing to help anyone out or just give a quick read over your essays!</p>