Interested in reading my Common App essay? Any help appreciated.

College Essays
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<p>I would be so so grateful for some feedback on my essay. Any help would be lovely.</p>

<p>I did the prompt "Some students have a background or story that is so central to their identity that they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story." </p>

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<p>BUMP i really need help lol plz guys :)</p>

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<p>Sure I can help! I’m not an very experienced at college essays but I’m a professional writer so maybe I could help make some edits :)</p>

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<p>Hey man, I can help you out if you still want!</p>

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<p>sure i can help out</p>

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<p>I can help too</p>