who wants to be brutal

College Essays
1

<p>and critique my essay?</p>

<p>be as harsh as you can possibly be.</p>

2

<p>I'm quite brutal.
And I'm a '13.</p>

3

<p>alright i will pm it to you</p>

4

<p>i don't really want to overwhelm people with feedbacks b/c the voice should still be there. Unlike some essays i read which lost its voice after 15 surgeries. But i will still read it and critique if u want.</p>

5

<p>me .</p>

6

<p>I don't mind. PM me.</p>

<p>Disclaimer: I'm an 09er though, but my essay's at the editing stage right now.</p>

7

<p>Brutal.!
well..I could give my honest feedback to you
PM me :)</p>