Who wants to harshly criticize my essay?

College Essays
1

<p>Hey guys,</p>

<p>I would be really grateful to those who want to look at my essay. Please comment if you are not a graduating senior. Thanks!</p>

2

<p>On it and ill see what I can do. Current double major.</p>

3

<p>I will proofread and provide comments about it. Feel free to PM me.</p>

4

<p>i will read it for you.</p>