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<p>A one of a kind mind
To NYU wants to apply</p>
<p>A really rigorous life he has had
Since he was young I may add</p>
<p>Sports are my obsession
Even though technology is my fascination </p>
<p>An Economics and finance education I want to obtain
and a successful life I would like to maintain</p>
<p>lol i know it sucks only had like 2 hours to write all the supplements
let me know what you think</p>
<p>To be frank, it doesn’t rhyme that well. I’ve also written a poem that rhymes; I’ll pm it to you if you want.</p>
<p>rofl thats a pretty sick poem, i just laughed out loud to myself, alot better than mine</p>
<p>111 views and only 2 replies, come on doesnt anyone have more comments</p>
<p>transition from “rigorous life he has had” to using “I” onwards confused me haha.</p>
<p>agreed with ^ and for 2 hours not bad!!</p>
<p>Want to check out my limerick:</p>
<p>There was a young man with a vision /
Entrepreneurial and driven /
NYU AD /
The place he should be /
All that stands in his way is admission!</p>
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<p>not bad, no idea on how to do a limerick</p>