<p>I've shown it to my guidance counselor, and she said it was great. But I'm not sure if I trust her. PM me if you want to help!</p>
<p>Guidance counselors and teachers at school are great for two things:</p>
<p>Glaring Errors
and
Grammar.</p>
<p>Try passing it onto a family friend, parent, adult you trust, etc. They tend to be good at these things. If you know someone in college right now...they might have an idea of waht to look for as well.</p>
<p>I'll be happy to give it a read, if you want.</p>
<p>i'll read it</p>
<p>make sure to tell the topic you choose</p>
<p>or say if you made up your own topic</p>
<p>thanks</p>
<p>PM me</p>
<p>Why don't you trust your counselor? I don't think she want bad things for you. Anyway send it to me if you want.</p>
<p>if you can't trust your counselor, how can you trust us
anyway i'll give it a shot</p>
<p>ill read!!!!!!!!</p>
<p>I'll read it. pm me.</p>
<p>I'll read it. pm me.</p>
<p>I'll read it if you want. PM me with it :P</p>
<p>i'll read it</p>