<p>I wrote it about the Tunisian revolution I lived recently and my mother's dream to go to the USA and how I want her dream became mine !
I also Iam thinking of applying early to Upenn , so could you guys tell me if my essay is good enough ?
I am open to all your comments
Thank you</p>
<p>Yeah, as long as you can show your growth through this experience and not just focus on the adversity you faced. Tunisian revolution is not the average topic and you should wisely use your advantage.</p>
<p>Yeah i can read it for you and give you positive and negative comments. Message me</p>
<p>I’ll read it!</p>
<p>I just emailed all of you guys! Thank you</p>