<p>I’m currently writing my Brown essay so I’m looking for someone, preferably a Brown admit, to look over my essay. I also need help with the ‘why me’ part. Many people have emphasized the importance of this, so help would be needed. Thanks 
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<p>You’d be much better off bringing this essay to people who know you, such as friends, family, teachers, or your college counselor.</p>
<p>@bruno14 I disagree because I’m an international student and practically everyone around me doesn’t know English, so it’s useless. </p>
<p>Any one willing to read my essay?</p>
<p>Not a Brown Student, but I would love to read it and give you my advice on it. </p>
<p>Same I am not a Brown student, and I would be willing to read. Dont worry, I don’t plan on applying to Brown - way too liberal for me :D</p>